Saturday, November 28, 2009

Do you like this poem?

*****



Polite Audience



Grey smoke layers



An hour閳ユ獨 worth of anxious cigarettes



The music goes down and the lights go up



As the comic takes the stage



Tugs on his shirt tail



Sweeps back the hair from his eyes



Snorts into the mic for a check



閳ヮ毊e sure looks funny



Staggers around the stage



The satirist bellows, enraged



Politics and the Pope, 閳ユ窌et me a rope!閳?br> But really, not many jokes



Two sets of comical outrage



And bits of food thrown from the stage



I wanted to laugh once or twice



Like a humorous monkey encaged



*****



Do you like this poem?

Yes! I like this very much. Great image of the event.



Do you like this poem?

i liked it. good job.



Do you like this poem?

Thats really good!



Great job



Do you like this poem?

Hmmmm %26lt;looking with critical eye that only a fellow comedian can do so well%26gt; Well, TD, I am not up to your level of poetry, and, it is a good thing the Missus does not have to live on your income as a comedian. LMAO



Do you like this poem?

Ba Bamm........Not too critical ,,,Nahhh



Yes......I liked it



Do you like this poem?

Nice poem and i like how the comic comes on stage with all the smoke and how you explain it all the way.I can almost see the smoke and see the comic as he hits the mic for sound check.......Great as always



Do you like this poem?

haha you called yourself a monkey, and monkeys dont throw food.

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